Thursday, January 11, 2018

Deep Remorse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a dream he came to her
And left alone giving nightmares
The night was sweet and long
But the dream didn't prolong
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 30 April 2018

A poignant write that explains depression.+++10 Robert

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Richard Wlodarski 11 February 2018

A heart-wrenching poem written with such great compassion. Let God's love shield us from the words that pierce the heart. And make us contemplate suicide.

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Rini shibu 11 February 2018

Thanks Richard for your visit and wonderful comment

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Akhtar Jawad 21 January 2018

Sometimes one is forced to commit suicide but I think one should be courageous to face the bitter truths of life. A sad and touching poem.

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Rini Shibu 21 January 2018

Thanks Akhtarji, I agree with you but now a days suicide rates are rapidly increasing

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Muzahidul Reza 12 January 2018

Like a dream he came to her, here is problems Rini Now in our subcontinent it has been a serious threat to the girls, You have written well poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 13 January 2018

Reza now a days it's very common.. Thanks for sharing your views

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Lamar Cole 11 January 2018

This is a very heartfelt poem and the ending was very surprising.

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Rini Shibu 13 January 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your comment

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