Like a dream he came to her
And left alone giving nightmares
The night was sweet and long
But the dream didn't prolong
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A heart-wrenching poem written with such great compassion. Let God's love shield us from the words that pierce the heart. And make us contemplate suicide.
Sometimes one is forced to commit suicide but I think one should be courageous to face the bitter truths of life. A sad and touching poem.
Thanks Akhtarji, I agree with you but now a days suicide rates are rapidly increasing
Like a dream he came to her, here is problems Rini Now in our subcontinent it has been a serious threat to the girls, You have written well poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10
This is a very heartfelt poem and the ending was very surprising.
A poignant write that explains depression.+++10 Robert