I've lost all belief
I had in myself
The person I see in the mirror
is somebody else
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Hi Jools, lovely piece...reflection teaches us all doesn't it? ...but with words of your own mirror image, you truely understand the meaning of truth.....excellently penned and well delivered poem..........keep expressing my friend...I admire your craft...10+ Best of Health & Happiness Jon
good regret this...if we look back on our deeds into the mirror of conscience, often we find a ghost of our own false ego affected face...beautiful write, Jools...insightful...10
'Cause I've lost trace of who I really am Hope I'll find myself soon and then I'll be back again ------- beautiful last stanza with a positive outlook in life...10++++
we al have been there. nice form. nice message.10 for this one. reminded me initially of my piece, Scares me Really