Friday, November 11, 2005

Deep Pile Comments

Rating: 5.0

She’s sitting
cross-legged on the floor
plucking the fluff
from a deep pile carpet
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Sheila Knowles
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Jerry Hughes 07 December 2005

Sheila, be proud, this is outstanding writing...

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Tony Jennett 29 November 2005

I know the feeling Sheila and you express it so well without saying it. Beautifully done

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Julie Bond 14 November 2005

love your poems, this one really hits the spot. though I wish you wouldn't remove them after a time, like old friends I miss them, x Julie

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Raynette Eitel 12 November 2005

Wow! This really nails why we can't reach our kids, hmm? This is an example of a poem that says so much without stating it. Very well done. Raynette

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