Deep Passionate Kisses... Comments

It's not bad, but you used too many of the same adjectives in my opinion. The more you use the same word, the less power and punch it has. I would say something like this Slow passionate kisses of depth..powerful gifts of touch..lips ablaze with burning desire..tasting every inch of your body...traced by breaths of warmth.. together, we melt into one.

A well articulated and beautifully written romantic poem. You captured the deep love felt through passionate kisses to drive home your conviction. I was profoundly touched by the powerful display of passionate emotions as depicted by your poem. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.