Some hurts that go deep
Deep inside stabs the heart
The intense and endless pain
Suffocates and makes breathless
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Painful details of a delicate soul is sharply depicted in your poem Rini ......10
Sleepless restless nights are the hardest moments of depression when Left alone with the thoughts Thanks for sharing Houda Boukassoula
It is time you kneel down Earn for comfort andstrength. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.10
The intense and endless pain Suffocates and makes breathless.....yes kneeling down and praying. it is the only way........ thank u for this fine poem which ends up in prayer. love it.
Hi Rini, Yes, a stab in the heart-most of us have felt it some time or other. Emotions expressed quite assertively. With limited number of words, you have been able to create an ocean of feelings. Good write. A 100+++
Yeah, its true. It happens sometimes with most of us. Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
Some hurts go deep inside heart and gives endless pain. You have so nicely and touchingly inscribed here. Marvelous poem on hurt and pain. Thanks for sharing....10
Rini, this poem drives home pain in every heart. Well penned.+++10 Robert