Deep Of The Water Comments
Down in the water
by the edge of the river
where time stands still,
.....if only forever.
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Hey ya, A perfect 10 for you from me! ! I like the way your words flow in this poem of yours. Embedded meanings, nicely sentenced! ! Nice, really nice! ! With lots of best wishes and love, K.Poornima
I kept waiting for the Chris Farley punchline of 'In A Trailer'. All kidding aside...a very 'deep' poem....
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9/7/2025 6:45:26 PM # 1.0.0
Wow... i really like the ending of this poem, too!