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x Hard to understand. Seem to have more then one subject in the verses cherokee Perez Reyes6 hours ago I am thinking it is about someone trying to get to know someone on a personal level. It could be just a bit more detail for the reader 1 hour ago

Needs grammatical work BabyGirl6 hours ago I love your emotions that your conveying in your work, but I feel it needs a few grammatical fixes... Like i have came across many. But my heart. It just needs a few subject/verb fixes but I do love the depth is just an imagination line...that line is beautiful Comment 0 1 hour ago

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ok Harold R Hunt Sr6 hours ago good pen great write. Comment +1

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