Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Deep Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

When night gets deep,
and when i feel that,
You are not mine,
I want my loneliness,
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Sahar Sahar
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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 February 2010

want my loneliness, To wrap me, In silence all around me, ................... .cry of innocence by lone silence heart when longing love intense, quite amazing write by imagery, as when ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 03 November 2009

hi...wow... u wrote some very amazing linesstrong potent and emotive...deeply touching wow again here yer ten...and cheers too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 November 2009

My pink lips, and curved tongue, feel the salted taste of tears, my moaning chest, Inhales deep, and keeps in chaotic, Thinking, To quite my desires......cry not in open else it will bring shame on you....beautiful theme with clear message of loe.. i admire it....10 read mine.... cry not....a cross road...come home...home bound...she did not come

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Ying Escalona 28 October 2009

wow..this is great Sahar..nice flow....and that curved tongue is very seductive

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