Deep Night Comments

want my loneliness, To wrap me, In silence all around me, ................... .cry of innocence by lone silence heart when longing love intense, quite amazing write by imagery, as when ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

hi...wow... u wrote some very amazing linesstrong potent and emotive...deeply touching wow again here yer ten...and cheers too

My pink lips, and curved tongue, feel the salted taste of tears, my moaning chest, Inhales deep, and keeps in chaotic, Thinking, To quite my desires......cry not in open else it will bring shame on you....beautiful theme with clear message of loe.. i admire it....10 read mine.... cry not....a cross road...come home...home bound...she did not come

wow..this is great Sahar..nice flow....and that curved tongue is very seductive