Deep In My Heart Comments

i love it n remind of guy n i give u 10+ well done

Every stanza showed what your heart is, so meaningful and romantic...great imagery used in this poetic theme...i loved the whole frame. a 10/10.

...'life we live is but a dream to forget, just hold on in my shadow for i will make you live'... well meaning lines...make up the soul of this good motivating poem...10

I like the final stanza in this piece...great work

wow! ! very very interesting poem. Liked these lines alot 'leave me not, for my life will lives only with you, believe what i see not in every wilderness you find light, not even memories to remember that life we live is but a dream to forget, just hold on in my shadow for i will make you live', it'll be in favorite list mimzy