Deep in my heart,
This feeling’s all that I can’t figure out,
Till that day came by,
Wasn’t sure so I wonder why,
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Dear Alex, A passionate poem but trust me, spring and love will come again. Appreciate your willingness to share such intimate thoughts through your poetry. Dorothy
Love can be so elusive. We want it to be exclusively shared. Something special that's returned and felt. Written with an emotion only the author can deliver as it is done here. Very well done.
This poem portrays heartfelt feelings of a very strong love for someone special. It displays a longing for this special person, in the hope that they will spend a lifetime together. It's truly a very passionate piece, a great tribute to that special someone. Well done Alex, I will be back for more. A big (10) from me, enjoyed the read.--Melvina--
Good poem, Alex. I think if it were put to music it wood make a great song. Something I would listen to and buy.
hey Boi, you are ready great in writing out the feelings of others that can't express it in this way. Like me, am feeling the same way deep inside of my heart for a girl that is so far away from me. i love this poem.u got 100% on this poem fr me
Excellent poem, nice flow, well pinned and straight to the point approach to it, I really like d that, great job, ~10~ your friend Tracy
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