Thursday, December 13, 2018

Deep Freeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

I march
Thru the snow,
Limbs frozen
Heart frozen
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Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS
Eugene Wiliam Levich 22 December 2018

A lovely poem, Sandracita. Come visit snow-less Florida - beautiful weather just now - but stay away in hurricane season. No place and no person is perfect. Alas!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2018

and this goes...........................................To MyPoemList! .............Thank you that I may add this here. GBU. Amen

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2018

CONTINUED: the smallest tragedy, as a remedy for my bitter smile. Your poem is marvelous, dear Sandra! ! A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and Full Vote. I like your inner humor very much, a God's Gift, sure. He Blesses YOU in abundance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2018

I so admired your poetry that I instantly write a brevity my Love was not Lost, Along the way By bitter frost but mine was lost all the while with a bitter smile..................Your poetry is so enjoyable, constantly with thought-provoking one, it oft invites me to write here...........

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2018

my typo, sorry: Latest alinea: The with must be erased and there must come an a. Thank YOU.

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Kostas Lagos 14 December 2018

Lost love is more painful than deep freeze. Clear and well written!

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2018

Your words send shivers down my spine and pinch my soul. Awesome and heart touching.

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