Deep Feeling Comments

You're a very good poet. This poem is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

english may not be your first language; but man you're GOOD! keep writing!

Wow, Toufik, this one is very good as well. Very nice, full of feeling. Wonderful!

I think if you improve on your English a little more, your poems will captivate the reader like you intend. Wonderful thoughts here. Well done!

Much better English than the previous one. The feeling I got from reading it, was that it could be a little bit longer. I really liked the theme, but it ends a little too abruptly. Otherwise, it runs very well. Just needs to have more development of the theme, or in simple language, make it a longer. Keep writing :)

the last part is awesome!

I could everything? Great other than tht as far as i can see ^^.

Heart speaks here! A real-poem! ! I love the flow! ! top marks! !

It's great, I like the rhymings. Put more effort the sky is your limit. You can read & comment on my poems also by clicking on my name. Thanks

I enjoyed the rhythm to this poem. Since no one lives without soul That's why I'll call anytime by phone Trying not to be alone Nice work.

Words from the heart cross all boundries. Great poem Molay

I ll look the fool do you mean... (I ll be like a fool.. or I ll look like a fool) I guess I ll be the fool, or a fool...would sound better 2- no one lives without a soul or his soul.. 3-try to be more oblique I am nt a critic but this is what I think

9 outtta 10 my friend tooooooo short, but very straight forward. I'd like to see more similes or metaphors. I LOVE SIMILES

Too straight to the point you need to put more metaphors for it to taste better

it is simple and to the point but in my opinion, i thought it could have, should have been longer. it ended too abruptly.i like the way the words blend though.

Like it. A good poem. Easy to read and understand. Great write.

Be careful whom you love, sometimes when you're lonely things can become distorted, (making unwise dissensions) hence I will try anything, I could Everything; A person could be with someone else and still be lonely because that person isn't right for them. If the person you are writing about is not someone that you could be friends with, like, have things in common with, make each other laugh, empathic toward each others needs, etc....there is nothing to build on, no foundation for a deeper, meaningful, love binding relationship. Good poem. Keep penning :)

Nice. i really like this one.

well expressed! i like the truthfullnes and the openness. anyone can relate to it.

Good honest emotions Molay. Writing is like learning to paint, words are just colours and shades :) Best wishes to you and keep writing.