Deep Eyes Comments
I could feel helplessness
Almost visible by worry lines
He may try to put brave front
He was the only person to bear brunt
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Touching and honest. Julia Wilson10 hours ago I like the refreshing authenticity in pieces like this. Comment +1
A liitle rough Billy Loving10 hours ago Needs some revision Comment +1
Half-baked Red Mint10 hours ago The idea, the feeling is there. The form needs a little more work.
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I could feel helplessness Almost visible by worry lines
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good poem Danielle Coe-Wysong10 hours ago Not exactly my type but written well. Comment +1 .