Deep Ends Of The Sea Comments

A fine effort. Congrats.

A very beautiful poem, marred only by a few small typos or misspellings: line 3 should have EXCEPT instead of EXECPT last line, WILL instead of WIL Congratulations for having it selected Poem of the Day once again!

Very inspiring poem written beautifully. Brushing off the disdain and believing in your self go hand in hand.

Very nice.... The human condition is filled with so many things. Among them are the disdain that comes from other's who demean us - whose familiarity with us makes them feel as though they have the right to discourage, presuming us to be as little as they themselves. Even Jesus Christ noted that He would be ineffective in His own home town for all who were familiar with Him would presume Him as lesser than they themselves. To them He was but a carpenter's son and would never rise to anything more. Yet by spreading His wings kings became fearful that His reign would rob their own. This poet recognizes that disdain, that wretched familiarity, and reminds us that it should be left behind. Valid subject, valid poem. well written also...

A brilliant poem with strongest message - believe in yourself, even though you are mocked you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. must be noted and put in thought welcome such beautiful poem and draw in mind the pictorial words

Very inspiring poem, worth reading several times. Excellent imagery too.

lovely piece of poetry.Thank you.

lovely piece of poetry.Thank you.

Beautiful... thank you :)

I like this poem, resonates very much with my circumstances.

Good one, Savio. Liked the rhymes and reasons. Keep it coming!

Simply loved this poem, especially the last part, believe in yourself, even though you are mocked you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. Congrats, Savio! This poem does indeed deserve to be the poem of the day

nice ink, really enjoyed it, an it was comforting, thank you

I like this- good write and engaging. thank you! ~mye3

A highly motivating poem, very optimistic and encouraging. Great job!

You will conquer the deep ends of the sea. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

A nice short poem with a wise message. Very inspirational as Bonnie said.

A very inpirational write..... Bonnie

Nice short romantic poem. nicely written

a nice philosophical poem ++++10 thanks for sharing anjali