Sunday, August 24, 2014

Deep Emotions Comments

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I close my eyes,
You're there,
Open my hands,
Despair,
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Sandra Feldman
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Fabrizio Frosini 14 July 2016

ok, Sandra.. copied.. '' Sono solo il vento, / Per favore, lasciami andare '' - lovely

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Leah Ayliffe 27 August 2014

A little haunting at the end, fabulous!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2014

'I'm just the wind, Please, let me go' - Everyone would like to be a balloon, having read this poem, to hold the wind inside. Simply fantastic, one of your best!

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