Friday, November 7, 2008

Deep Down Inside Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep down inside,
I feel evil in me.
It's so hard to deal with,
I only want to be free.
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Stephan van Pinksteren
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Matthew Holloway 06 December 2018

A really strong and potent write thank you for sharing 10

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Jennifer Sollmann 07 November 2008

aww, don't give up! i find that writing poems helps to work through those kinds of feelings and that poems like this are the best because they have so much emotion.

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angel unknown 07 November 2008

ive been there before.. good job keep writtin :)

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