Wednesday, March 15, 2017

Deep Declaration Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel your absence keenly;
It's a cutting void.
Your voice has left for a far flake adventure.
I am low and sunk into lettrage.
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Brian Mawadri
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Susan Williams 07 September 2020

My old comrades have vanished; And believes are like a past memory. My words are tolling. And my mind is in mourning.- - - - - > I think you want the word: beliefs" - -these 4 lines are important and they read like they're important

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Mawadri 23 February 2018

Thanks@Chinedu Dike for appreciating.

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2018

Poignant and sorrowful rendition crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Brilliant work of ar, rich in metaphors. Thanks for sharing Brian.

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