Thursday, May 22, 2014

Deep... Dark Secret Comments

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She told me once
Her deep dark secret
I will take it to my grave
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Lyn Paul
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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

This person found the right person to unload such heaviness.

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Mark Dillon 17 July 2014

A lovely poem, a special moment shared, thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Very captivating poem..This shows the qualities of a true friend, who is good at heart to keep the secret sincerely and to lighten the pain of a friend as well. Loved the way you presented it.

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Valsa George 15 June 2014

A secret shared with one single soul and never divulged to anyone else will remain a secret for ever, at the same time it will relieve the burden of the one who has been carrying it! If someone, trusting us shares a secret, we are bound to keep it with ourselves. It is a rare quality. A great poem too!

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Captain Cur 31 May 2014

The secret of a secret shared but not revealed, unburdening both your cares, strong write.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 26 May 2014

really enjoyed this poem...very good poem!

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Colleen Courtney 26 May 2014

There is no better feeling than being able to unburden a secret of your soul to a best and trusted friend. Beautiful words you have penned!

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Wonderful words that forges a feature of a fantastic friend. Well done my friend.

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Valerie Dohren 23 May 2014

Secrets should always be respected and kept, as long as their content is not likely to harm others. Well expressed.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 23 May 2014

the onus of being the only sharer...excellent write Lyn.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

Tears are the most efficient cleanser to clean our heart what i feel. Well written and touching the deep of my heart.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 May 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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