Sunday, November 6, 2011

Deep Dark Paleness Comments

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Deep dark pale pain that screams within me. It screams for time has no gain.
The pain so real that I can't feel.
The only love once that was mine and now I come to find that you are no
longer in sight nor will you were willing to fight.
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Liz Bitelove
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Crimson Love 09 November 2011

Death is only a part of life, love shall overcome such meager attempts at seperation. truly a beautiful poem.

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Dave Walker 06 November 2011

Really liked reading this, a great poem. May i invite you to read my poem called, lilly.

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Very sad and touching, its always sad to loose the ones we love, but having to loose them to the mighty death lives a deep dark pain. nice one

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Very sad and touching, its always sad to loose the ones we love, but having to loose them to the mighty death lives a deep dark pain. nice one

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