Sunday, September 13, 2009

Deep Cuts Comments

Rating: 3.8

You an instantaneous spark,
While i am a persistant notion,
Staying on minds,
An intruded impact,
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 30 September 2009

And above all, A thought, Broken like mirror. When cuts bleed, ............................. Cuts so deep. hmm good example, yea once the mirror is borken never joints its parts.. like thoughts.. which always need to be focussed, and done to be in perieving way.. keep to be alive with insiration, and spread to be like the perfume.. i like your poem and even poetry..and enjoy.. and thanks for considering me this much able to go through your work..well done..10/10

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Tamara - Hanaring 18 September 2009

beautiful write Sahar..lovely..enjoyed the reading

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Rehana Nazli 16 September 2009

A thought, Broken like mirror. When cuts bleed, ............................. Cuts so deep I loved the above metaphor of broken mirror for split, disturbed and profound thoughts. well done.

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