Again you perform open heart surgery
with the skill of many years, blade wielded precision,
a sharp serpents tooth venom filled,
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Words strip paint but when these are so gently said in love these words heal pain. An amazing and brilliant poem is well penned. Revisiting this we feel very glad...10
Wow this is so creative deep and sublime. Is it sarcastic I'm not sure. Your wording and phrasing is awesome and impressive. A poem that makes me scroll down to vote which is a bit hard to cross over to but such great poetry deserves the effort. Soo nice to read from your inking again, Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too titled, a tribute to every new poem
Andy? , say something to me to 'prove' that YOU [not an imposter] wrote this. i hope it was from your hand. your foot will 'work for me' also. it is GOOD, BTW. but until i hear satisfying reassurance(s) , i shall NOT send to MyPoemList. online trickery is a! as is offline trickery.......of course. bri ;)
Performing open heart surgery of love is really an amazing act. Words strip paint but so gently said here everything that will expel venom. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10
Profound yet sublime.this lines are so touching