Deep Crisis Comments

True, a man with patience will rule the nation, is the saying

After much is said and done, the last finishing line gives a ray of hope to face the life with all gay and happiness.

i agree with kaitlyn. it takes some serious skillz to keep up a rhythm like that while not pushing it to make sense. great flow and all together great poem =)

This ones really good. I like the rymeing alot. everything makes perfect sence