Thursday, October 15, 2009

Deep Breaths Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't see
Running through the trees
At night
Running so fast
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Iron Panda 23™ 07 April 2010

what gold fish said^-^.... except i give u a 2300++

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Gold Fish 15 October 2009

Brilliant. I see we have another storyteller, indeed. This was a very engaging story with vivid imagery and strong emotions as if I had been there with you myself. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work. Solid.10+

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