Friday, September 23, 2011

Deep Black Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.0

I’m sorry I can’t say it above a whisper.
I start to feel faint as the world starts to shiver.
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Crimson Love 21 October 2011

short and beautiful, I enjoyed it. :)

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Vipins Puthooran 30 September 2011

Short poem but I like the way you created it...those three words may become us shy and we say them in heart by bowing our head down....

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