Deep An Dark Comments

Now ash in this world god holds I loved you once an you used it Now all I have is hate so lose it I am mad at the path u have take but you never lisen Your now on your own I loved you once not all I hold for u us hate so sweet and deep idea, menaingful thought and the heart feeling poem.. really a good poem, short but have long story has hidden inside..appreacite your poem and poetry also 10/10