Friday, May 2, 2014

Deep Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are told to look past the surface in writing
To look at the deeper meaning of a sentence, or action
But what if you saw everything like this, and were forced to think deeply about it all
No one imagines the curse this is throughout a day
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Miles Millikan
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Jonas Goncalves 03 May 2014

'We cannot sit back and just watch the world go by'. That verse makes me reflect a lot just like the entire poem. The way how life is nowadays is really sad, but it's true and the last verse shows it; life is just something we have to content ourselves and to do it, we live it. I enjoyed that poem a lot. Congratulations on having it done.

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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Nice use of words miles.keep it up.please checkout my poems

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