Sunday, March 16, 2008

Dee, The Young Master’s Mare Comments

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She was just a new endeavor, maybe about half grown
But there was “spirit” in her eyes the day the boy brought her home

I thought the new would wear off and his interest soon would fade
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C R Clark
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Andrew Blakemore 28 April 2008

A sad but beautifully written piece, well done. Andrew

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Mary Gordley 18 March 2008

Oh, I had the feeling from the first this might end up a tear-jerker. Of course the reason it is able to produce that reaction is that you have done such a fine job of story telling in this poem. Thanks again.

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