Dedications To A Girl With The Glasses 3 Or, The Nights She Made Melodramatic Overexpressions Comments
'But man trust me I did not lie.
I don't even remember whether I used
the word rape. But if you are saying
it then I trust you. That was over-reaction.
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pardon me, Souren.. you're right (of course) . I have to admit my mistake and.. 'confess'..! Point is that I had just experienced 3 ''impossible reads'' *** -previously- and when I read the first 2 stanzas of your poem, I made the mistake to assimilate your write to the others.. so I stopped reading further..! I'm really sorry.. Cheers ___ *** referring to 3 writes posted by others at poem hunter
I can understand, sometimes I myself can't go through some of my own poems! ! Cheers mate, have a great day :)
'm nt pure suvo.nthng cn make me... mmm... please, Souren, can you write in a proper way? It helps a reader to 'go through' your poetry.. Thank you
I aprreciate your concern Fabrizio, but did you actually notice that I have apparently, to the best of my knowledge, written 'properly' through the rest of the poem and the part that concerns you is under quotations? The apparent 'improperity' of the syntax in that part is suggestive of the manner in which the 'melodramatic overexpression' was conveyed, in such a vague and unusal manner that to the speaker of the poem it sounded confusing as well as difficult to decipeher it's 'proper' meaning.. Just give that part a thought, would you kindly? ?
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7/25/2025 6:43:26 AM # 1.0.0
I hate to judge using one side of the story alone... But she sounds devilish. That said, the heart wants what the heart wants. And once you've fallen for someone, usually you remain so until you've found someone new to direct your feelings towards. I am enjoying this series, I only wish that hopefully by the time I've read the last of it, some of your pain will have diminished.