Monday, November 30, 2009

Dedication Comments

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We find that life lifts us up, seeming so unreal
Almost knocking us to our knees to weep and kneel
Gifts are given to us so righteously in surprise
Honest is love that trusts in truth without lies
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Deborah Cromer
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Your poem shows honesty. And you poem shows much love. i like love and i like your poem.

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Nikunj Sharma 30 November 2009

DC The poem is a true hallmark of your style, simple, sweet, communicating all the time and a real gripper.........some phrases that are stuck to my heart as always..though the lil heart may run outta place now 1.Honest is love that trusts in truth without lies - So true and honestly written too 2.The trueness of devotion is beautiful and royal - if ever one stops and thinks, he shall realise what depth these words have, I am knocked down 3.Connecting and going forward is not ever a task Dealing with and acting upon tomorrow will freely show - So true of soul which is dedicated to life and love, that knows how, when where to move and more importantly keep moving and forging ahead with friends and ties... 4.I have been traveling with you, almost answering a call - some relations are created in heaven, if only two people know and adhere to the holy guidelines... 5.For two to meet and fast become lovers is so rare Two lights in the darkness together glowing with care - that's a wonderful expalnation of a phenomenon that most experience. what a beautiful way of putting it across. 6.Believing in hope, trusting soley in what is meant to be - hopes are paramount, supreme, without believing in them.......nothing happens 7.Friendship and closenesss, acting miraculously in healing to cure - its does act miraculously, and is a powerful tool that god and times have provided us with.... Once again a flower of you poetic garden smiling and spreading its fragrance to the readers.... WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Deborah Cromer

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Portland, Oregon
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