Friday, January 2, 2009

Dedicated To Liz. Comments

Rating: 4.9

i thank god for every second that we can share,
for its moments like this that im happy you are there,
you are everything that i asked for in my prayer,
its like god send me an angel when nobody cared,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Kym Toohey 16 October 2009

Nice poem buddy yet this line seems outta place...'i have dreams of starting a family of our own' since you have already thanked Liz for blessing you with a child. So I'd rework it to flow in a timeline. Sweet poem... she's a lucky girl to have the heart of a poet by her side.

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April Levins 13 October 2009

Express the essence of a love that only grows with the actions you show! ! !

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This piece is full of intense emotion, each word expressing how deep is your love for Liz. Lovely creation for someone who really meant for you. Gracias! best regards, jdh

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 October 2009

Lucky woman, lucky man.Great!

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Erin Ford 11 September 2009

poems about love are always heartfelt, but you put a little of your soul when you write.and i wish you and your wife many years of joy.

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Tyease Collins 19 August 2009

I'm so happy for you two =]] I wish you guys the best in anything that you guys do God Bless <3 -Liz

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Marissa Hollis 19 August 2009

20/10. that was amazing. ima sucker for a good romantic poem. that was beautiful.

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Mona Martinez 15 August 2009

aww! ! ! very beautiful. she's a very lucky woman and very special to you. i loved this poem very much because i felt all of the emotion you feel for her. very lovely. keep writting. :)

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Ashley Davis 12 August 2009

aw that is really sweet! very deep and i could hear the passion in the voice in the poem great job! keep it up! give it a 10!

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Antoinette Valentine 11 February 2009

I loved it! ! ! It was very beautiful.

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Catrina Heart 04 February 2009

Wow! ! ! such a heartwarming composition here...written so beautiful and romantic...i felt sincere thoughts too...10/10

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Eldon M Thomas 03 February 2009

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful. I pray that you write her beautiful poems like this for the rest of your lives. I pray that she inspires you to write eternally.

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Eric Adams 02 February 2009

i think its beautful but as carl said its not mail. try coming up with a beat when writing a poem it helps me.

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Myrtle Thomas 31 January 2009

A very heart felt write your lady is a lucky girl.I liked the flow of your words.

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Mark R Slaughter 29 January 2009

A heartfelt gesture Jose, wife wife must be proud and flattered Mark

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Nikkie C 29 January 2009

For a girls point of view that was very sweet

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

This is an eloquent testament of your love. You may have won the heart of your wife with this poem.

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Miss Love 14 January 2009

That was a sweet poem, and not all people are as luck to find a love like that. When they need it the most...

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sumaira .....ir 14 January 2009

Lovely poem! And Lucky girl han!

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(: God's Wild Child :) 13 January 2009

aww! i love it, very sweet she should be happy to have a sweet husband like you. and i wish u both a very happy relationship. =] good job.

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