i thank god for every second that we can share,
for its moments like this that im happy you are there,
you are everything that i asked for in my prayer,
its like god send me an angel when nobody cared,
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Express the essence of a love that only grows with the actions you show! ! !
This piece is full of intense emotion, each word expressing how deep is your love for Liz. Lovely creation for someone who really meant for you. Gracias! best regards, jdh
poems about love are always heartfelt, but you put a little of your soul when you write.and i wish you and your wife many years of joy.
I'm so happy for you two =]] I wish you guys the best in anything that you guys do God Bless <3 -Liz
20/10. that was amazing. ima sucker for a good romantic poem. that was beautiful.
aww! ! ! very beautiful. she's a very lucky woman and very special to you. i loved this poem very much because i felt all of the emotion you feel for her. very lovely. keep writting. :)
aw that is really sweet! very deep and i could hear the passion in the voice in the poem great job! keep it up! give it a 10!
Wow! ! ! such a heartwarming composition here...written so beautiful and romantic...i felt sincere thoughts too...10/10
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful. I pray that you write her beautiful poems like this for the rest of your lives. I pray that she inspires you to write eternally.
i think its beautful but as carl said its not mail. try coming up with a beat when writing a poem it helps me.
A very heart felt write your lady is a lucky girl.I liked the flow of your words.
A heartfelt gesture Jose, wife wife must be proud and flattered Mark
This is an eloquent testament of your love. You may have won the heart of your wife with this poem.
That was a sweet poem, and not all people are as luck to find a love like that. When they need it the most...
aww! i love it, very sweet she should be happy to have a sweet husband like you. and i wish u both a very happy relationship. =] good job.
Nice poem buddy yet this line seems outta place...'i have dreams of starting a family of our own' since you have already thanked Liz for blessing you with a child. So I'd rework it to flow in a timeline. Sweet poem... she's a lucky girl to have the heart of a poet by her side.