Sunday, July 11, 2010

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Decorated Silence

the trail of smoke pronounced my name
hesitant to leave.......
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prasanna kumari
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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 July 2010

roaring trees trying to hide shadows, echoes and mysteries and her child cold breeze alleviating the miseries...................... .. yet the quest befuddles on rune of shadow by dream heart when vociferates being soaked in echoes of mysteries, wonderful exposition soul innate in inebriation, emotive and evocative curved by ingenuity,10+, thanks for sharing

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Baru Gobira 14 July 2010

A narrative poem giving the feeling of a lost soul moving in and out of the shadows. -Baru Gobira

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