Friday, March 13, 2009

Declaration Of Insanity Comments

Rating: 2.6

Beyond the corridors of my mind,
Reality begins to unhinge itself.

This unusual distortion disrupts my sanity
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Chloe Francis 19 July 2010

This poem kind of leaves you a little jagged when you read it... you feel confined, restricted, bound by eviler force that laughs at your pain, and i really like it.

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a deep and heartfelt poem well expressed..

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Domenica Statler 29 March 2009

as i always say...one must explore insanity to truely know sanity....

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Stephen Black 23 March 2009

Very modern technique. Your thorough analysis of insanity's difficult ways really show in this poem. I sense that you poetry seems to be a little bit like Sylvia Plath's. Are you inspired by her at all? Answer me with message or comment please.

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