Sunday, November 29, 2009

Decisions Like This Come About Once In A Lifetime Comments

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The outcome of lives,
The product of disgrace and lying for yourself,
It’s just a tear in the ocean finding its
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Christopher's Dead
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Whitney t 10 December 2009

hey Christopher, love the poem......this poem is so sad but it's good at the same time....I like your poems the are great and you should keep riting.....the pom just grabbed a hold me and wouldnt let go......love the poem...goood jobbbbb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Lady Of The Rose 29 November 2009

wow that's so good, the emotions in this poem just reach out and grab a hold of you. such sadness, such pain. your definitely putting the words to the feelings.

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