Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Decisions, Decisions Comments

Rating: 5.0

If in France I went to Toulouse
I would have nothing to lose.

There would not be too much abhorrence
If I went to Florence.
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David Wood
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 April 2025

A well crafted poem with lovely rhyme and rhythm. Great play on words!

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Rob Lamberton 26 April 2025

The woods always make me smile at home or abroad!

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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

so many places to travel to. Go with your heart. It will take you to the right place. nice rite

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 11 June 2013

I love this one maybe it's just my feeling, but I felt a deep impression behind your words that look simple and its rhymes flow with the touch of a seductive, feels crispy while reading thank you for sharing

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Joan Smith 08 June 2013

A very interesting slant on making up your mind

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Valerie Dohren 06 June 2013

So many choices - go where the sun and your heart takes you.

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Paul Brookes 04 June 2013

Nice play on words. BB: O)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 June 2013

Conclusion is natural since you describe Swansea beautifully in many of your poems. Also life is full of decisions and where we are is a result of all decisions made. Another poem simply beautiful.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 June 2013

Lovely rhymes melting in the mouth....travel's travails we all undergo! 10.

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