Friday, June 21, 2019

Decisions Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where do I go now
surroundings are new
will I live a lonely life
I still don't have you
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Aqua Flower
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Matthew Holloway 04 July 2019

i feel I am one with you in this poem

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Carl Roussell 22 June 2019

Only time will tell if the right descision was made, but all journeys begin with one step! !

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Aqua Flower 23 June 2019

Sometimes making the right decision is difficult until the healing begins. I have a open wound.

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Sandra Feldman 21 June 2019

Pain and indecision very well expressed. We can feel the anxiety. Well written. With fluid sentiments that grasp us and enable us to feel your fear.

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Aqua Flower 23 June 2019

thank you for your comment, Sandra. The poem expresses many emotions from loss to fear of lonliness.

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