Monday, October 22, 2012

Decision Made Not To Live! Comments

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We can't be carved, programmed and displayed,
As others expected for their dreams collapsed,
Carving done at every part of our life without informed,
Programming updated every stage of our life that intended,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Valerie Dohren 30 October 2012

The price we have to pay for living in society, structured and organized. Good write.

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Claude H Oliver Ii 23 October 2012

I like how you describe the need for each of us to become responsible in order to be ourselves - liking or not, but at least aware.

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Dave Walker 23 October 2012

A fantastic poem, we all have choices to make, but sometimes they are made for us.

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