Monday, October 13, 2014

Deciphering Love Comments

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Glancing through leaves, water glistening,
falling over rocks, taking with it whatever
wants to float or roll along it's path.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 13 October 2014

This is a beautiful poem, in fact, I would call it gorgeous because that word better identifies what makes it so appealing - the vivid images from nature that are intimately connected to emotional states. I'm not certain of what the poem means but I know what it does. It puts me in a frame of mind (and heart) in which I am ready for those thrilling and dismaying feelings of love. This poem also speaks to the one you wrote about the 19-year-old girl. And what is says to her can only be expressed in the words you have written. DECIPHERING is an excellent word choice - what we could not comprehend WE CAN NOW COMPREHEND!

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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