Sunday, September 29, 2019

Deciever Comments

Rating: 5.0

I strive to see the good in people,
A quality of character I hold so dear.
But in you a black heart beats,
Showing no emotion and never a tear.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2019

A brilliant and vivid depiction of deception. A person who never shows emotion is no human at all. One who possesses a.black heart could take you down to darkness The last stanza conveys a great decision full of hope and positivity. Beautifully written.

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Shaun Cronick 30 September 2019

Rose Marie I thank you so much for your kind and uplifting gracious comments. Your heart-felt comments are treasured and help to inspire me to write likewise poems. And The Red Shoes will be ready soon, among others. I'll email you straight away when uploaded. I promise. And thank you again good Rose Marie. Take care.

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