Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Deceptions Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a seagull flying high,
As I hear your distant cry.
Not of pain but of suggestion,
Wait for me is the question.
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Amy Fifita
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Chitra - 24 February 2009

great concept..well penned

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Fred Temple 19 February 2009

This was enjoyabel Amy-your own personal words were reassuring and yet tragic. This was an awesome read; they were brilliant lines all over the place, but still humble in execution. WELL DONE!

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LOVEFOOL Aka 18 February 2009

Powerful write with good rhyme 10+

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