Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Deception Point Comments

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At which time do you deceive me?

Please tell me. What have I done to deserve this?
You make me stand so low, as you're at eternal bliss...
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Joshua Swanson
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Dillon Gay 14 October 2008

Very good poem, Joshua. You really tried hard to beat me.

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Myrtle Glo Oliquino 14 October 2008

It's just so sad that the people we used to love so much can do so much to hurt us even in their own, sometimes, unknowing ways. *sigh*

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