In her dreams she was laughing
I was crying and awake
her body was moving as if in dance
my heart was beating like boiling bubbles
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Even in dreams she knew the art of lying Even in my awake state I failed to learn the lessons. Truly beautiful..............
Truth is always better even if you have to suffer because of it.Good write Asim, God Bless u.
You are the master of expressing different aspects of life. You have wisely crafted the contrast ideas in the poem. Great work. Loved the last couplet.
The poem is a revelation of life's truths which you have done with remarkable ease. Thanks. I would like to quote a couple of lines from the poem to prove it: To say the truth is like lighten your heart to conceal the truth is carrying burden on your back
And one of the best I have read of yours poems.10 Marvelous points