Monday, July 7, 2008

Deception Comments

Rating: 2.3

You tell only lies.

I tell only truth;
You fear such truth.
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Jonathon Agee
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Stephanie Testalamuta 11 July 2008

hey nice poem i like it its all about the truth and that well nice. thanks.

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 July 2008

I guess I should apologize for being so vague about my last comment. I was a little too cute as well. What I really meant was that the poem required a great deal of thought to really understand and grasp. Such complicated thigs are hard for some readers and they may have difficulty with the work as being a good piece of writing, which it actually is. GW62

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 July 2008

You must be good at algebra. This, unfortunately, is poetry. GW62

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Shutter Queen 09 July 2008

Nice poem. I like the idea. You seem like a really good poet

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