Sunday, June 29, 2008

Deception Comments

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When you sit and think,
you take into account of much;
Life is tremendously not worthwhile.
Off are the thoughts,
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Javier Falcon
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Alex Gomez 19 July 2010

Amazingly well penned. Great description and intriguing plot.

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Cynthia Hand 05 July 2008

hey this is really cool one of the best ive read

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Ershad Mazumder 05 July 2008

Really its a very good piece. Good luck Falcon

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 July 2008

This young man writes with optimism. This is rare for a young man in this time and place. I don't worry about him now. Only later, when he learns more. Then, he will be tested. GW62

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Catherine Rica Cosico 29 June 2008

Great write! ! ! I love the last stanza especially the last line...Thanks for translating... Cate

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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Javier Falcon
Miami, Florida
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