Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Decent Lie Comments

Rating: 2.7

A decent lie is like–
a voluptous coconut.

The fruit, husk thick,
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Ivan Donn Carswell 10 July 2007

You have made a powerful poem out of a voluptuous lie - I'd never thought of a coconut in that way, great, original thinking! Rgds, Ivan

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