Tuesday, December 3, 2013

December Triplets Comments

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1.ILLUSION OF TIMES

A breeze passes by me and there blooms a smile on my face
A wind blows over my home and its roof is shaken and
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Savita Tyagi 15 December 2013

Great triplets. Enjoyed them all. Sketch of a miser reality for many.

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Dinesan Madathil 09 December 2013

Thank you beloved poet friends for all your comments.... Valsa madam, you are decidedly choosy and are free from blasphemy of the kind.Thank you for the detailed comments, Aswath, I need to wear them whether my legs bleed or not.. the world tells me.., Thirupathi sir, young poet wizard Rubab and sister Geetha thank you for reading.. and Shahziaji, the triplets 5 and 6 expose our reality of the earthly suffering and the futility of waiting for an eternity of wishful/magical thinking.. thank you for your analysis.

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

@poet's notes: No fun here! @triplets: meaningful economy of words; 1: passing of breeze, blowing of wind and embracing of hurricane...and all the expected consequences are composed with a suitable word-choice; 2: Blake's Auguries of innocence comes to mind by this search, 3: The art of the seller 4: Frailty, thy name is woman 5: what if Jesus comes in reality...are we in those colors He wants to see us in? 6: we are waiting for Godot...will night never come? will time never pass? 7: desperate remedies...Dinesh ji i remember what Iago said, For i am nothing if not critical perhaps the times are terrible, they give rise to satirical thinking! ! !

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Rubab Atwal 06 December 2013

an excellent poem, enjoyed it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 December 2013

Some illusions are real. They keep happening. Thank you for your concerns.

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Aswath Raman 03 December 2013

Aha! And what else we do expect from you sir! Illusions of our times are forced to be seen and thats quite unfortunate. Baby can be seen girl too yet it is certain that she will have to take her mother's path. Our dog is for sale and I believe some has pulled it teeth too yet(if you know what i mean) . And I'd dare to call you a male chauvenist, if that her anguish is not symbolic, but I'm sure it is. This Christmas will also pass just the same and you'll have to open the eyes to see the kingdom of God (That's what believers gonna say) . And finally, did u try barefoot?

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