December snow falls among naked trees,
blanketing fallen leaves like soldiers on a battlefield.
Paths covered with footfalls from the past,
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Wonderful and imaginative....I loved it! ! Great job, Brian! Cheers, Thomas
I really liked this poem. I could feel the loneliness with you as you felt it and it was really sad. I like how misleading it seemed. At first it seemed like everything was going great and then it just... fell apart near the end. Great imagery too. I could picture the snow on the ground and I felt like I was there with you as you were seeing it :) Terra