Sunday, August 31, 2008

December Rain Comments

Rating: 4.0

Winter brings soft beautiful stars falling from above,
descending onto our plain angle,
covering our possessions and materials.
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Dave Shmave83
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Greenwolfe 1962 31 August 2008

This was a pleasant descriptive read that captures the sparkle of winter. GW62

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Kadelia Achille 31 August 2008

thanks for the comment...you write great verses here and splendid personifications. Great write!

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Ency Bearis 31 August 2008

great verses...wonderful write..great to read... Ency Bearis

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 31 August 2008

Thanks for my comment. I'm glad some people feel the same way that I do. I love this poem of yours. Keep up the good work. I like the line 'With his rays he cradles them.'

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