December Rain Poem by Dave Shmave83

December Rain

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Winter brings soft beautiful stars falling from above,
descending onto our plain angle,
covering our possessions and materials.

The sun shows us how they sparkle,
with his rays he cradles them,
making the wonderous sight my own.

I watch my feline leer and swivel,
her gaze of mother's bravura,
heals and calms,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 31 August 2008

This was a pleasant descriptive read that captures the sparkle of winter. GW62

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Kadelia Achille 31 August 2008

thanks for the comment...you write great verses here and splendid personifications. Great write!

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Ency Bearis 31 August 2008

great verses...wonderful write..great to read... Ency Bearis

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 31 August 2008

Thanks for my comment. I'm glad some people feel the same way that I do. I love this poem of yours. Keep up the good work. I like the line 'With his rays he cradles them.'

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