December Epiphany Comments

Great poem Max.. December is such a melancholic month but you managed to give it some beauty! HBH

Stop to smell the roses, and then back to the salt mines. Yikes, what a slice of life, brother!

I love this poem: the melancholy beauty of the first stanza and the factual tone of the second. a very powerful contrast, ulrike

This is great Max. It suggests a solitude and yearning for something (someone?) else. That such a mundane incident could be considered and captured says a lot about you as the writer. Excellent piece Max

It says so much about you Max that you would even take notice to such beauty. Very nice poem. Sincerely, Mary