December Comments

I agree with Jasmeen Khan'scomment about sudden shift. Death and doom seem out of place among pleasant feelings.

It's a beautiful celebration of winter and a good manipulation of letter D. I feel a sudden shift in thought after couplet 7, if you had moved in the same way to the end, it might have been more interesting but just my suggestion, it's a nice write.

yes it surely does! December is a poetic month in this regard! a nice poem!